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My good friend

　　A-Ru Lee was my classmate last year. We majored in the Department of Industrial and Business Management in Far East Collage. He is from YongKang City, and he now lives in Taichung with his classmates of Chao Yang University of Techology.
　　A-Ru is a very wise and funny person who was popular in our school. He enjoyed singing, and he dreamed to be a star or a composer some day in the futrue. Because of the above reason, he has to focus on the entertainment news.
　　We often did a lot of things together before such as going to the cram school, going to eat dinner, and talking about homework and special topic. Actually, we have a lot in common. For example, we are willing to help our cousins when they need us. We are to read books outside class, and we have the same dream. These made us become good friends for five years.
　　We always had a good time together. I learned many things from him. In additon, I am very happy to know him in my life.
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　　A-Ru Lee was my classmate last year, we were major Department of Industrial and Business Management in Far East Collage. He is from YongKang City, and he lived in an apartment with his parents for five years. He now lives in Taichung with his classmates of Chao Yang University of Techology.
　　A-Ru is a very wise and funny person, who was popular in our school. He enjoy singing, and he dream to be a star some day in the futrue, even to write words for many songs, both he hope to record his album to go on sale. Because of the above reason, he have to focus on the entertainment news.
　　We often do a lot of things together some time, such as going to the cream school, going to eat dinner, talking about homework, and special topic. He always studies harder than other classmates that everybody will ask him if everybody has question. Common point make us become good friend in five years.
　　We always had a good time together. I learned many things from him. Also, I am happy to know him in my life.

Description-outline

I.MAIN IDEA

Who? A-Ru Lee

Where? by telephone

When? Oct. 22

II.BODY

Basic background information

He is from YongKang City.

An only child in his family.

They live in an apartment.

Writer's personal reactions

A-Ru is a very wise and funny person.

We often playing and eating in some time.

He always studies harder than other classmate.

He is a popular person in our school.

Enjoy singing very much.

We were classmates.

III.CONCLUSION

I learned many things from him.

we always have a good time together.

Combine sentences

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The other region is a desert basin in the north and east.

Chihuahua, the largest Mexican state,is divided into two part which are a mountainous area in the west and a desert basin in the north and east.

2.Disney World covers a large area of land. It is an amusement park. It is located in Orlando, Florida. The land includes lakes, golf courses, campsites, hotels, and a wildlife preserve.

Disney World an amusement park located in Orlando, Florida, cover a large area of land including lake, golf courses, compsites, hotels, and a wildlife preserve.

3.Jamaica is one of the world's leading producers of bauxite. It is the third largest island in the Caribbean Sea. Bauxite is an ore. Aluminum is made from this ore.

Jamaica is the third largest island in the Caribbean Sea, and leading producers of bauxite in the world. Bauxite is an ore and Aluminum is made from it.

4.Robert Ballard made headings in 1985. He is an oceanographer. In 1985 he discovered the remains of the Titanic. The Titanic was the “unsinkable” passenger ship. It has rested on the floor of the Atlantic Ocean since 1912. It has struck an iceberg in 1912.

Robert Ballard is an oceanographer, he made headings of discovered the remains of the Titanic in 1985. In spite of the Titanic was the “unsinkable” passenger ship, but it stilled struck an iceberg and rested on the floor of the Atlantic Ocean since 1912.

5.William Shakespeare's father was a glove maker and a town official. William Shakespear’s father was John Shakespeare. He owned a shop in Stratford-upon-Avon.Strafford-upon-Avon is a town. It is about 75 miles northwest of London.

William Shakespeare’s father was John Shakespeare, he was not only a glove maker and a town official, but also has owned a ship in Strafford-upon-Avon, it is about 75 miles northwest of London.

6.The Republic of Yemen is an ancient land. It is located at the southwestern tip of the Arabian Peninsula, This land

has been host to many prosperous civilizations. These civilizations include the Kingdom of Sheba and various Islamic empires.

The Republic of Yemen is located at the southwestern tip of the Arabian Peninsula of an ancient land. This land has been host to many prosperous civilizations, including the Kingdom of Sheba and various Islamic empires.

How to make chocolate

Chocolate is the most popular food in the world. You can use it make out various kinds of candies, cake and ice cream. If you following these steps, you can well make out simple chocolate.
First, Chocolate cuts become flinders and put in the bowl, make chocolate fully dissolve and put in the hot water bowl and mix slowly. Next, change put the bowl in cold water basin and keep on mix slowly to cooling become mud form.
Third, put into hot water basin, to make temperature increase and keep on mix one side until that it produce the gloss to chocolate. In model pouring chocolate jam liquid into on the flat plate slowly, the nut minced spills evenly of the surface.
Finally, put into the refrigerator of refrigeration until complete become hard and solidify carefully.
Although it makes people happy and offer a large amount of heat to eat chocolate, but eating too much may cause disease questions, such as decayed tooth and get fat.

How a breakfast cereal is made.

As soon as wheat is harvested from the field, wheat grain is transported to the silos. Then it is stored in the silos. Not only the grain is cooked to soften but also cut and formed into thin strips. These are woven into biscuits and each biscuit is baked until brown. Finally, it is packed ready to be eaten.