Thursday, October 19, 2006

Combine sentences

1.Chihuahua is divided into two regions. It is the largest Mexican state. One region is a mountainous area in the west.
The other region is a desert basin in the north and east.
Chihuahua, the largest Mexican state,is divided into two part which are a mountainous area in the west and a desert basin in the north and east.
2.Disney World covers a large area of land. It is an amusement park. It is located in Orlando, Florida. The land includes lakes, golf courses, campsites, hotels, and a wildlife preserve.
Disney World an amusement park located in Orlando, Florida, cover a large area of land including lake, golf courses, compsites, hotels, and a wildlife preserve.
3.Jamaica is one of the world's leading producers of bauxite. It is the third largest island in the Caribbean Sea. Bauxite is an ore. Aluminum is made from this ore.

Jamaica is the third largest island in the Caribbean Sea, and leading producers of bauxite in the world. Bauxite is an ore and Aluminum is made from it.
4.Robert Ballard made headings in 1985. He is an oceanographer. In 1985 he discovered the remains of the Titanic. The Titanic was the “unsinkable” passenger ship. It has rested on the floor of the Atlantic Ocean since 1912. It has struck an iceberg in 1912.
Robert Ballard is an oceanographer, he made headings of discovered the remains of the Titanic in 1985. In spite of the Titanic was the “unsinkable” passenger ship, but it stilled struck an iceberg and rested on the floor of the Atlantic Ocean since 1912.
5.William Shakespeare's father was a glove maker and a town official. William Shakespear’s father was John Shakespeare. He owned a shop in Stratford-upon-Avon.Strafford-upon-Avon is a town. It is about 75 miles northwest of London.
William Shakespeare’s father was John Shakespeare, he was not only a glove maker and a town official, but also has owned a ship in Strafford-upon-Avon, it is about 75 miles northwest of London.
6.The Republic of Yemen is an ancient land. It is located at the southwestern tip of the Arabian Peninsula, This land
has been host to many prosperous civilizations. These civilizations include the Kingdom of Sheba and various Islamic empires.
The Republic of Yemen is located at the southwestern tip of the Arabian Peninsula of an ancient land. This land has been host to many prosperous civilizations, including the Kingdom of Sheba and various Islamic empires.

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