In this comedy film, Bruce (Jim Carrey) is a leading and facetious character. He worked in a television station, and he did everything wrong and liked complaining all day long. Thus, God (Morgan Freeman) gave him a week miraculous power to create a prettier world.
At the beginning of the story, Bruce asked: "God, why do you hate me?" I thought if people gave the others what they wanted, people would want to get more. It is human nature. Though he had God's power to control the entire world, he did not get the heart of his former girlfriend (Jennifer Aniston). He asked God, "How to make people love me?" God answered, "It is a good question. If you know the answer, remember to tell me."
Though it was a comedy movie, behind stimulate deep thought for human being. I treasure friendship between my friends and me before I saw this meaningful movie.
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5 comments:
I find your essay that there are some errors in grammar. You should use the same the tense."if you know remember tell me." There are three vebrs in this sentence.
Your topic is clear and organization is appropriate, but in the third paragraph the first sentence I cannot really understand it.
I have some recommendations for your some sentences.
1.”He worked in a television station who do everything were wrong and like complained all daylong” could be “He worked in a television station, and he does everything was wrong and likes complaining all daylong.”
2.” I thought if people gave some thing what he want, then people will want more” could be “I think if people gained something what he want, and then people will want to get more.”
3.” God answers: It is a good question, if you know remember tell me” should be “God answered: It is a good question, if you know, remember to tell me.”
4.” Single parent's mother holds a part-time job and work, but still can find time with his child play ball that's miracle” could be “A single parent's mother has a part-time job and work, but she still can find time with her child playing ball; that's miracle.”
I cannot really understand what you want to describe, and some sentences confuse me.
After reading your essay, I find some errors in grammar. There are some sentences have two verbs and I can't really understand what does the last paragraph mean.
‧You have described the film clearly.
‧You have some grammar mistakes.
In paragraph 1...
‧"He worked in a television station who do everything were wrong and like complained all daylong." The tense of the sentence should be the same, so I suggest to change "do" to past tense. And you can change "like complained" into "liked to complain" or "liked complaing".
In paragraph 2...
‧the first sentence, "The story beginning,...", I think "At the beginning of the story,..." can be better.
‧the second sentence, "I thought if people gave some thing what he want,...", if I were you, I might change the sentence to "I thought if people were given what they want,..."
‧Despite+ noun
‧Jennifer Aniston
‧How to make people love me?
‧God answered....
In paragraph 3...
‧The first sentence, "...., it stimulated ....behind."
‧"..., people wish to get..."
‧"..., but miracle is created by people themselves."
‧"...between my friends and I..."
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