A-Ru Lee was my classmate last year. We majored in the Department of Industrial and Business Management in Far East Collage. He is from YongKang City, and he now lives in Taichung with his classmates of Chao Yang University of Techology.
A-Ru is a very wise and funny person who was popular in our school. He enjoyed singing, and he dreamed to be a star or a composer some day in the futrue. Because of the above reason, he has to focus on the entertainment news.
We often did a lot of things together before such as going to the cram school, going to eat dinner, and talking about homework and special topic. Actually, we have a lot in common. For example, we are willing to help our cousins when they need us. We are to read books outside class, and we have the same dream. These made us become good friends for five years.
We always had a good time together. I learned many things from him. In additon, I am very happy to know him in my life.
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Monday, October 30, 2006
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My good friend
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2 comments:
The grammar is not very correct. ^_^
Dear Travis :
I'm glad you have a very good friend.
In paragraph three, "...... talking about homework and special topic", I think change coordinating conjunction "and" to "or" will be better.
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