I.MAIN IDEA
Who? A-Ru Lee
Where? by telephone
When? Oct. 22
II.BODY
Basic background information
He is from YongKang City.
An only child in his family.
They live in an apartment.
Writer's personal reactions
A-Ru is a very wise and funny person.
We often playing and eating in some time.
He always studies harder than other classmate.
He is a popular person in our school.
Enjoy singing very much.
We were classmates.
III.CONCLUSION
I learned many things from him.
we always have a good time together.
1 comment:
Sections I and III are OK. Yet, you should write more in the body section and watch your grammar carefully.
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